Tuesday, 28 March 2017

Explanation 17 Writing Sample 1

HI (who ever you are)  I just received the result for my writing test, readers if you are going thought this  please don't end me. here's my writing:  

School is where every kid goes, from 12 year olds to 5 ,  to year 8’s to year 1. School is for everyone that is young. At school lots of events are going on  like camp, rainbow’s end and polyfest, our  School has lot of kids, we the school there is 613 of us in this school. Here  is where we learn, here we do P.E, reading ,writing and maths. We are in auckland ,right on the north island.  

Yes this is my whole writing, if you are judging please don't. Here's my result. Ideas are 3, Structure are 2, Organisation are 2, Vocabulary are 3, Sentence are 2, Punctuation are 3 and spelling are 4.

Thank you for your time.

Friday, 17 March 2017

Living the culture tradition.

Team 5 Went to polyfest! And if I’m rubbing this in your face, then sorry. Here’s why we went to polyfest, We went to polyfest to see how people hold the tradition and see tents, workshops and muck more!

Polyfest is a awesome event, there’s samoan, tongan, cook Island groups performing and much more! There’s a lot of people performing in this event and a lot of people watching. We team 5 had to line up in the street ( not the real street and block) and did the role. Right after that we slowly move onto 2 buses and marked our way to polyfest.  

We arrived at polyfest so excited that some of us had their socks bowled of. ASB was so kind we went in polyfest by a secret way into polyfest. Once we were in, Mrs tele’a asked team 5 to line up and sit down and wait for some polyfest organisers. We waited for so long we began to melt. Some of us started to play hand game, like pikachu and apple on a stick.

Finally the polyfest organisers came to talk to us about ASB and polyfest, and just like that we were on our way. Me and some other students we had a group with Mrs Tele’a, and we visited all the Stage. There one called Diversity stage and the Maori stage as well. We went to visited tents as well, like fire service, Babba's house, Mia FM, ASB truck and much more. After We lined up and came back to school on bus.

So did you like to recount? Are you planning to go polyfest, If you are then have fun!

Friday, 10 March 2017

Water cycle.

Here is my Poster about the water cycle, Evaporation, condensation and precipitation.

WALT: Compare and contrast ideas from one text to another.

Wonderful Water

WALT: Compare and contrast ideas from one text to another.

Wonderful Water isn't it great? Isn't water great when it safe to drink, safe to swim well we are learning about how to keep our water clean.

Water Worries

WALT: Support all my answers with evidence from the text.

Water, Are you thirst? Well we here at Pt England  school are learning about water.

Tuesday, 7 March 2017

Simple and compound sentences

WALT: Identify & write simple and compound sentences.

STOP! Quit scrolling up and down on my blog, and take a long look at my Simple and compound sentences.

Poster the three kete of knowledge.

Hey Where are you going? When before you going to whatever your doing stop and take a look at my poster about The three kete of knowledge.

Monday, 6 March 2017

Visual Mihi

Hi this is my Visual Mihi. I'm samoan and i'm proud of being samoan, I have a big family and I  believe in god and I like softball.