San Diego zoo

WALT:think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

1th

San Diego zoo is a super, long ,way, away, but it is a famous zoo as well .Too bad we're in nz not in San Diego.So we had to  go on the website that they made.It was almost  cool as the zoo.  

2th

Yippee we’re going to San Diego Zoo, It going to be a exciting day. . . We just  found out that we're  just  going on a website on the internet and on net books. It about animals and San Diego zoo (boring). San Diego Zoo has lot’s of awesome animals , It was really...OK OK I admit looking at videos about animals not so bad but it was still boring, have you seen it?            

Christians Fearfactor Challenge - Plan

WALT: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

On My birthday when I was turning 7 I wish I was on fear factor. guess what I am on fear factor!  Well not really. The work we are doing is Terrible absolutely terrible. Mr Goodwin show us a YouTube video first, It was revolting. Two team mates eating thing I shouldn't say ,but then it was  ever more revolting when he said “room 6 fear factor! and that my friends take us back to the beginning… Read more if YOU have the guts!! 

Plan of my paragraph topics

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1	How Mr Goodwin show us the Disgusting video and told us what we're going to do and choose 4 kids who are going to do the fear factor and choose me and the other.
3. Body Paragraph 2	Mr Goodwin told us the instructions and the price and set up the challenge.
4. Body Paragraph 3	how we ate the food and how we react in the challenge.
5. Conclusion	What I think about the fear factor challenge.

Christian Habitat - Study

WALT: summarise information into presentations.
If you was on a desert and you don't know what to do well read my presentations about habitats and how to survive the desert.

HAPPY HOLIDAYS(: !!!!!!!! X _ X

Hey guy it's the LAST DAY OF SCHOOL ):

It going to be 2 weeks of holidays there is 3 important things to do: Have a good holiday, be kind to your family and... SEE YOU ALL IN 2 WEEK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By:Christian.L Market Day Recount ( enjoy)

Walt: write an interesting and detailed recount .

Buying, selling, hook people in, it’s all part of market day.That right guys we at pt England school in the our new classrooms last week we had a market day on Friday. If  you didn't we had a trade fair 4 weeks ago and  last week on Friday it was the day we got our stuff. I decided to buy something for home. We had our own money that we use for our market day it called “ Pt and pieces”.   

Do you want to know  my trade and enterprise group?, well  that I in is home ware. We make home ware  like making candles, soap and air freshener. we made a lot of candles and some kids was making a soap all by themselves! how cool is that!          

We had to work our butts off for the “set up”. So in that case it was cool and a bit hard working. Us boy had to get the tables getting ready to go and we had to get brooms and sweep the floor. I was the man working guy, I had the line the tables up, put them down, put them up, move them,carry them and pull them.

I was going to buy first and then sell last. It was One hour to go we had a plan take turns for selling and buying. Their are 4 girls and I'm the only boy in my team, so that makes 5. It was my turn first to buy and along with 3 girl. We all slitted up up the other two girls was selling. I was going to be a ice block first, there was cup size ice blocks and little small cup size. I took 1 of the small one, it had two flavours there was ice and some kind of weird gooey red thing that you would like. I was wolfing it down with it tasty,red,flavour and it cold,wet ice. I had 5 pt in my hand ( 5 bucks ) it costed me 20 pieces ( 20 cents ) I buy the 2 girls ice block as well.   

Then it was time for my turn to be the boss of the shop. we sell a lot of candles and the money that we made was 10.50 pt. It was so epic. Then we put our money together with the other groups I by one of the candle for another group it was red and blue and I buy two loom bands a pizza slice, a loom band batman necklaces and a rainbow loom band.

then it was over we was cleaning up pack everything away and counting the money up.well that all I have good-bye for now!  

Recount Writing
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Write for my reader	I've tried to think about my reader	My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.	My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.	My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
Purpose	I tried to meet the purpose	My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose	The message is clear in some parts of the recount.	My text fully meets the purpose. The message is clear all through the recount.
Introduction	My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.	My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.	My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.	My introduction wows my reader!
Paragraph Topics	My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.	I have tried to follow my plan. Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.	My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea. I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.	My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.

Task description:  we have to  writing a full recount about our Market day. we need to be thinking about the what happen and writ the main story and  rubrics to help guide our writing. 

Rugby

Walt: write a poem using nouns, verbs, and adjectives

Rugby

stepping,cold  

trying, sprinting,passing

         exhausted.

Adventurous Adverbs