Writing narrative.

From one night to another two trees come to live at night on a steep mountain where on one lived there. They were human before they turn into trees. In the human live they were in  deep truth love but they died, now they in deep truth love. The problem they are  apart. On the other side of a mountain. They communicate by letting their leaves been blown by the wind, passing a love message gently  through the wind.  

One sleepy night every human was asleep… expert for five kids. Max and mike the 2 twins, Jayden, tim tim and steve( the leader). There was time to time that the 5 of them has suck out of there house and became ... let just said they're awful.

The trees had no idea the kids was coming from them. The five watch the trees move with  their breaches held high and their size was huge. The five crept quite. Steve quietly spoke to his team of bad “  The trees are alive at night! We must cut down for good!”  Tim tim disagreed “ But what about war? What if they talk  or ever fight?”  steve replied “ then we must not do this alone”.  The 5 all agreed but not tim tim he was soft inside and he was new to the team. They haven’t been watch them closely,  As the kids silently fled away, the trees were listen...

The team had a discuss about the trees and it was clear to chop the tree off clean. So they tiptoed back to their house before they can make sure no one could hear them.

The be continued...

LAVA

Short Story

Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

long before over millions of years ago a volcano  has be waiting for someone to be with as he watch all the couples play on has island and singing “the song of hope” of years and years. He sang and dream that someone would Rise above water, but no one would.      

years of singing all alone turn he’s lava into stone utile he was on the brink of exhaustion. however another lovely volcano was at the bottom the ocean.

years of listening to his tune her lava growth and growth and she was ready to finally meet him above the sea.

The volcano above water,was sinking like his life is slowly killed before his eyes. But as he did not knew the other volcano (form down below) POP up in a explosion from the water. 

As the smoke cleared away there she was so tall looking, she had amazing eyes, but one thing was she was looking all around her but could not find him. He tried to sing to let her know that  she was not there all alone but with no lava his song was all gone, now he was at the bottom of the sea and she was above the sea.

The volcano above water remember how his and how it ment to her. Suddenly the love between them broke apart and the volcano rise up! O they were so happy to finally meet above the sea and THAT how Hawaii was made.