On My birthday when I was turning 7 I wish I was on fear factor. guess what I am on fear factor! Well not really. The work we are doing is Terrible absolutely terrible. Mr Goodwin show us a YouTube video first, It was revolting. Two team mates eating thing I shouldn't say ,but then it was ever more revolting when he said “room 6 fear factor! and that my friends take us back to the beginning… Read more if YOU have the guts!!
Plan of my paragraph topics
1. Introduction
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Orientates and hooks
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2. Body Paragraph 1
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How Mr Goodwin show us the Disgusting video and told us what we're going to do and choose 4 kids who are going to do the fear factor and choose me and the other.
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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Mr Goodwin told us the instructions and the price and set up the challenge.
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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how we ate the food and how we react in the challenge.
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the fear factor challenge.
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