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Before... the commonwealth is a family of 53 countries spread over every continent and ocean in the world although the people of the commonwealth are different in many ways they work together by sharing ideas and experiences skills and knowledge this year it will be held in glasgow scotland

After The Commonwealth is a family of 53 countries. Spread over every continent and ocean in the world. Although, the people of the Commonweathl the are different, in many ways they work together.By sharing ideas , experiences skills and knowledge too. This year it will be held in Glasgow,Scotland.

In 1914 the first  word war was started. Because the half for  the worlds hero was assassinated by a man with a gun.

commonwealth games

The first games was in 1930 in Hamilton Canada.

eleven countries went to scotland for the commonwealth games to play the six sports and fifty nine events.

Hockey!

Holiday!

Holiday!

At  8:00 clock  my family and I went to my  game. It was a blast  for the holidays also we have to go far far far far away . It  was a waste  for  gas  of the  van. We was soooooooo lucky  we…              

WON!

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All About me

food poem

Food.

hot, spicy,

eating,drinking,cooking                                                                                                

pizza,sushi,apple, pie.

baking,dishing,serving

cold,sweet.

trees,

By christian