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Before... the commonwealth is a family of 53 countries spread over every continent and ocean in the world although the people of the commonwealth are different in many ways they work together by sharing ideas and experiences skills and knowledge this year it will be held in glasgow scotland

After The Commonwealth is a family of 53 countries. Spread over every continent and ocean in the world. Although, the people of the Commonweathl the are different, in many ways they work together.By sharing ideas , experiences skills and knowledge too. This year it will be held in Glasgow,Scotland.