Last term the year 8’s went to camp, there were only the year 7’s at school to lead the school but some of the year 8’s did not attend to camp, so they had to stay back because they didn’t have permission, but it ok because we had fun.
When Miss Muliaumasealii our Samoan half Tongan teacher told us that we are going to have some fun we was so excited. Miss Clark said that we are going to watch some movies we are going to watch it after lunch time.
It was lot of fun and we even had popcorn for the movies and it was so delicious! When it was finished Ms Muliaumasealii said that who want to be in art with Mr Wyllys and we stand up and said we were going do my best in this group.
So when it was the first time on my frits group we said to matua what are we doing today he said we are going to work on are big art and we said we can do that. So when it was the next day we were about to be finished i was doing the most work in this group but we did my best work this is the picture… ,,the cooking group.
Hi Christian Calvin here its good to see that the yr 8ts had fun at camp. When you wrote your story I only spotted 2 commas in your story. Ok when you write your story you have to put a comma in each part in your story. But great story and keep up the good work.
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