Hey guy it's the LAST DAY OF SCHOOL ):
It going to be 2 weeks of holidays there is 3 important things to do: Have a good holiday, be kind to your family and... SEE YOU ALL IN 2 WEEK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Welcome to my blog! I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
Friday, 25 September 2015
Tuesday, 15 September 2015
By:Christian.L Market Day Recount ( enjoy)
Walt: write an interesting and detailed recount .
Buying, selling, hook people in, it’s all part of market day.That right guys we at pt England school in the our new classrooms last week we had a market day on Friday. If you didn't we had a trade fair 4 weeks ago and last week on Friday it was the day we got our stuff. I decided to buy something for home. We had our own money that we use for our market day it called “ Pt and pieces”.
Do you want to know my trade and enterprise group?, well that I in is home ware. We make home ware like making candles, soap and air freshener. we made a lot of candles and some kids was making a soap all by themselves! how cool is that!
We had to work our butts off for the “set up”. So in that case it was cool and a bit hard working. Us boy had to get the tables getting ready to go and we had to get brooms and sweep the floor. I was the man working guy, I had the line the tables up, put them down, put them up, move them,carry them and pull them.
I was going to buy first and then sell last. It was One hour to go we had a plan take turns for selling and buying. Their are 4 girls and I'm the only boy in my team, so that makes 5. It was my turn first to buy and along with 3 girl. We all slitted up up the other two girls was selling. I was going to be a ice block first, there was cup size ice blocks and little small cup size. I took 1 of the small one, it had two flavours there was ice and some kind of weird gooey red thing that you would like. I was wolfing it down with it tasty,red,flavour and it cold,wet ice. I had 5 pt in my hand ( 5 bucks ) it costed me 20 pieces ( 20 cents ) I buy the 2 girls ice block as well.
Then it was time for my turn to be the boss of the shop. we sell a lot of candles and the money that we made was 10.50 pt. It was so epic. Then we put our money together with the other groups I by one of the candle for another group it was red and blue and I buy two loom bands a pizza slice, a loom band batman necklaces and a rainbow loom band.
then it was over we was cleaning up pack everything away and counting the money up.well that all I have good-bye for now!
Recount Writing
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Write for my reader
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I've tried to think about my reader
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My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
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My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
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My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
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Purpose
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I tried to meet the purpose
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My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
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The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
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My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.
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Introduction
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My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
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My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
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My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction wows my reader!
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Paragraph Topics
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My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
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I have tried to follow my plan.
Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
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My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
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My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.
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Task description: we have to writing a full recount about our Market day. we need to be thinking about the what happen and writ the main story and rubrics to help guide our writing.
Tuesday, 8 September 2015
Rugby
Walt: write a poem using nouns, verbs, and adjectives |
Rugby
stepping,cold
trying, sprinting,passing
exhausted.
Wednesday, 2 September 2015
Tuesday, 1 September 2015
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